Hey, your primary concern should be with her pose, it doesn't really make any sense and looks like different pieces of different figures have just been cut and pasted together, this isn't helped by the fact that you put her in some armor thing that covers any indication of her body twisting. Next, (although thinking about it this should ...

I honestly don't think that I would got who it was were it not for the bat and costume. But I don't think I can really be much more helpful than that, other than just say really look at your reference. Look at every little detail like the shapes of features (getting the shape of an eye lid wrong can make all the difference with ...

I think the reason it looks off now is because there is no neck anatomy to be seen, the head can be turned to pretty much that position but there would be a lot of bulging/straining tendons and muscles. Also the shoulders are too narrow, a good general rule is 2 head lengths for the widest point of the shoulders in a relaxed position. Your ...

I really like your choice of colours here, the purples especially are working really well. I recon a bit more orange or yellow somewhere will really play off that purple well and make it pop even more. Really intrested to see where you will take this one. Are you planning on placing her in an environment/scene. Or keeping it as more of a portrait?

This looks sweet man, really coming along. I could see it as a book cover or something composition wise. A really good image. The sky I think is the biggest problem at the moment. It's too dark for a day scene and too light for night scene. Also I'd say it was a bit oversaturated. I recon make it more of a desaturated lighter ...

It's looking good man. Few crits for you if you want them: First would be put down the airbrush. Unless you are aiming for the fake magazine airbrush look it's not going to do you any favours.  Another thing is that her breast looks too high, but I think that may just be because you have one of the outlines going above ...

Honestly I would advice against using the swords as your main light source, especially as you said yourself; you don't have a clue what your doing. It is so incredibly difficult to do something like that properly, you need such a masterful knowledge of forms and the way light behaves, and in all honesty I don't think you are ...

Hey man, loving the textures in this one. Maybe try adding some shadow to the fish's body as you have such a strong directional light. For the water, I think really making the water a deep dark bluey purple below the fish will help give the image some more contrast and pop out even more. You could do this pretty easily with a multiply layer in ...

It's looking good man, and the pose is much more natural now. Although that wrist holding the crystal is looking a bit wide. Also I think the speculars and contrast on the crystal would be much more extreme. However lighting should be one of your first concerns, so when you suddenly throw in a completely new environment and lightsource ...

Colours are looking pretty good overall man. Those orb things above Ali are a bit distracting. The main issue for me at the moment is your edges, they are making the figures look like they were cut and pasted into the environment, try softening and cleaning up a few of them. Also I think a bit more work on defining the muscles and areas of the ...