Wow no replys? Any way a guy at work said how the last one looked like a diff style almost done by some one else.... i did both the last was like an 8 min sketch, i was just banging out ideas, the one im working on took me some time 20 min, and i kept making my gf pose for ref wich on the first one i didnt,

I think teh shoulders arnt to narrow, they are a teeny tiny bit it jus looks off because on the profile on strait on shoulders. I just want more of a soft brush, teh hard lines are killing it for me right now I see them going away and i think that's what got me. and for composition it is so close, that before u work up bg maybe move her left ...

Also maybe if the hands weren't in teh same exact position it might add some more feeling to the comp

I think u need to pump up the arms, he looks weak, takes all of the intimidation out. there is definition but it is so tiny, they need to be longer too So more like this (free transform ftw) looks like i broke it lol

O, and this is were it started (yes tail is coming in but i dont know how yet) I did this painting a bit ago I always ment to go and do a painting (this is from a page of a tun of the same drawing with dif colors)

So i worked on the top and skirt, as well as a little on the gun, that's it for tonight

I can def tell it is a night club, i think it might be fun if you dont crop it but pull out and show a bit of the background like dancers in cages or a dj, but make the "kill" not the focus right away, use the composition to make it second, make the eye flow into it like in a movie where it starts on teh dj then pans to the action. Its a ...

So think i fixed the gun. I did a little color, I threw a pattern over her outfit (It will be latter painted over but that pattern for the most part, im not down for just stealing a pattern.) I put a tattoo on her, changed her nose chin and jaw to make her a little more feminine and i also tried to make the horn more jagged so it looks broken... ...

So tear me apart, I want this one to come out really awesome so give me good and bad. I think the gun needs something but this is one of the first guns I have designed, and it is a color layout not finial colors, but that is there base so if u think they are off still yell at me