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Stop this!

Last post 07-19-2012, 11:24 AM by Lord Colts. 2 replies.
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  •  07-03-2012, 6:56 AM 391349

    Stop this!

    It's been a while since I last posted:

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Please note that this reads from right to left.

    This turned out a lot better than I thought it would and I'm really happy with the final result =)

    I'm particularly happy with the strong contrasts between the light and darkness (and am happy that I didn't go overboard with too much of the artliner as I tend to do =P )

    I'm also pleased with the facial features and the texture of the hair.

    I felt that I might have gone a bit overboard with the action lines in the top right panel and lost some of the dramatic effect that I was aiming for (as compared to the bottom panel effect, which I felt turned out much better).

    I felt that the proportions of the hands were also a bit uneven but am still happy with the way that they turned out =)

    Please feel free to critique =)

     

     

  •  07-18-2012, 11:48 AM 393188 in reply to 391349

    Re: Stop this!

    You have a very 'detail-heavy' style so I believe that the action lines look good and go well with the rest of the page. The hands look fine to me also, so overall, great work!
  •  07-19-2012, 11:24 AM 393305 in reply to 393188

    Re: Stop this!

    Thanks heaps for the feedback! =)
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