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Jmo's next painting - Golden Golem WIP

Last post 05-02-2012, 9:05 PM by Disco Matt. 1 replies.
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  •  04-30-2012, 6:55 PM 383999

    Jmo's next painting - Golden Golem WIP

    Attachment: GolemWIP7.jpg

    Decided to do a big scene of a stupidly giant golden golem wreaking some havoc. Most everything but the golem itself is pretty crude at this stage. Comments welcome!

     



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  •  05-02-2012, 9:05 PM 384574 in reply to 383999

    Re: Jmo's next painting - Golden Golem WIP

    Really liking this Jon and you're doing a fine job with the lighting...would love to see a really good expression on the golem's face to grab my focus

    EDIT: just had a second look and I think the composition is off a little, it feels like that arm/hand is splitting the picture in half, almost like an obstruction. Hopefully someone who knows what they are talking about regards to composition can put thier finger on it. I just kinda go "hmm...that feels a bit off somewhere", which isn't really that helpful lol Tongue Tied

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