Welcome Joe...and while I am not a fan of the typical children's "Anime" there are some forms that definitely capture my attention. Keep in mind though when you are copying your favorite style that the reason for it's look is not for authenticity or realism. The reason for the "anime" look is to reduce complex lines and textures to easily reproduced and quickly recognizable features.
The white wavy line in the hair is suggesting strong lighting from the front but you don't have any other equally strong highlights, other than the bit on her nose.
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