Soo, I ended up doing this Halloween card yesterday. Yeah, it sure is early for that but I will save it untill the end of october and then send it out as an invitation to our annual Halloween party ^^ All C&C are of course, welcome. Thanks!

 

 

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/Jim
www.jimsvanberg.se

Wow, this is really good!!!

I kind of wish there weren't those bats at the corners, though. They are distracting from your magnificent work.

I agree, especially about the lower pair of bats; maybe if you toned them down a lot if you didn't want to erase them altogether/

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Things just are, then they ain't.

I actually liked the idea of the corner bats. But you should make them more accurat. As they are now, they kind of look smashed on there. Not fully drawn out.

Otherwise, LOVE IT! Can you send me an invitation:)

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Life is contrast.

Thanks for all the crit guys :) I thiught about it, and I beleive I will try to integratre the bats into the frame, make the bats line art and a part of the frame, that wey they won't be like big black dots in the corners that distracts from the main picture. I will post the resault here when I get the time to do so :)

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/Jim
www.jimsvanberg.se

Hi.

I like the idea of the pentagram inside the moon. About the body, i think it's some "soft", ...maybe will be better with some angles.

:^)

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Ok, the bats are just outlines now so they hold a bit less visual weight ^^  I'm calling it done now :P

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/Jim
www.jimsvanberg.se

Ooo, Jim, that's brilliant!

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Trudi Topham,
Editor, Pantechnicon & Hub - The UK's best Sci-Fi, Fantasy and Horror magazines.
Web Wo-Ordinator: The British Fantasy Society.


URL: http://www.pantechnicon.net

Cracking job. The crits you got were spot on and acting upon them has worked really well.

Thanks everybody ^^

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/Jim
www.jimsvanberg.se

I'm a nagger as I often am:) Looks much better now, but I feel the bats would look even better black.

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Life is contrast.

Haha you can't have the cookie and eat it ;)

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/Jim
www.jimsvanberg.se

jimsvanberg:

Haha you can't have the cookie and eat it ;)

 

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Life is contrast.

I like how the colors are not overpowering each other. Nice blends.