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Silvanter's 2d stuff

Last post 04-01-2012, 5:33 AM by Silvanter. 4 replies.
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  •  03-30-2012, 8:53 AM 378400

    Silvanter's 2d stuff

    Hey first post here and was hoping to get some feedback thankyou

    Necromancer

     

     

  •  03-31-2012, 7:18 AM 378520 in reply to 378400

    Re: Silvanter's 2d stuff

    They're a bit on the big side, you need to scale them a bit for the thread. Creepy but in a good way.


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  •  03-31-2012, 12:39 PM 378540 in reply to 378520

    Re: Silvanter's 2d stuff

    All nice stuff Silvanter.

    At the moment I would say to work on the form and substance of your work. All of your images are bright and clear, which I really like, but they are all very flat. Imagine your subjects as three dimensional objects, because to me at least it seems that these drawings and paintings are a collection of flat shapes arranged to fit in the composition, a bit like a collage.

    What often helps is softening up some edges so that the viewer can see that the objects curve away. You could also try using shadows and highlights with a greater contrast (but keep the gradiants smooth) to bring forward the lighter areas and push back the areas in darker shadow.

    Looking forward to seeing more!!

  •  04-01-2012, 5:32 AM 378641 in reply to 378540

    Re: Silvanter's 2d stuff

    Thanks and yea I can see what you mean about it being flat, I'll practice depth with my current wips
  •  04-01-2012, 5:33 AM 378642 in reply to 378520

    Re: Silvanter's 2d stuff

    Haha yea I saw they were over-sized and annoying I'll make sure to do it proper next time should have read the post on resizing images first. thanks for the input
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