@ HansNomad: It's kinda like you mixed the wall button thing from prince of ersia 2009 with,
the prince of persia warrior within character design. also cropping this to a portrait frame would make the composition more interesting :)
@ Catzombie: Really nice, I like your fluent paint technique. The dragoon and the character are really cool.
Are you going to color this?
@ Claude Crow: cool concept, try not to loose focus on where to direct the viewers eye, because right now it's all over the place.
@ Samthespoiler: cool composotion and character, Right now I feel like her arm si still a bit too long. where is she pointing at/ reaching for?
@ Aocdb: Great progress, I like where this character is going. Maybe somme goggles and some changes on her mouth would be good.
@ Segujo: You've mad eone of the coolest interpretation of a farseer. I like the environment with the wizard and dragon looking into the globe.
Make change the composition by cutting away some parts so the viewer is closer to this.
a portrait view even clip some part of the dragon's wing on the left.
@ Ivan Garcia: Really nice, things are moving around in your piece which makes it very interesting.
@ A curious Twitch: Like the concept, would like to see where this is going. :) Is he going to eb in some sort of thinking tank?
what heppend to the cute kitty?
@ Mercury cat: Really cool! A native american inhaling herbs! Kinda spooky too.
Perhaps include his legs in the canvas as well.
@ Adventuregoat: Really like your concept, Would love to see the end resuld. You really thought of composotion and anatomy.
@ Domtopia: Love how your work turned out. I would have included her feet and the thing shé sitting on in the frame as well. but I sure like the concept and details.
@ JaKu13: Hey you also thought of covering up the eys. I like to see where this is going, she looks ver futuristic but her vision from way back.
Also kepe in mind to create an intersting composotion and direct things to places where you want the viewers eyes to dwell on.
@ Disco Matt: water monkeys building a water woman, really cool! very original :) I liked your earlier design too.
@ Smolin: love the sketch! The characters and the composotion, can't wait to see the end result.
@ Gnuchi: Great portrait and colors, love where this is going.
@ Tanjaraus: nice and freaky!! great dynamic pose too. Much better that your earlier design.
@ Bergu68: Cool seamonsters! I live how you direct the viewers eyes with your composition.
@ Midscrawl: Cool design, more wips plss!!
@ Guang: Very cool! The background is a bit dark though. cropping the image to a narrower portrait would do this image more justice.
Hope to have given you guys some useful feedback and good luck!
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