Okay this is my last night with the computer.
Here is the final wip, please be as critical as you want about anything that needs changing because if you don't I'll just submit it how it is 
Since last wip, I've added grass on top of the hair, bad move? I can't work out if it looked better before or not (been flicking the grass layer on and off trying to decide), also tried redoing the bit of hair at the end because it was looking a bit like a curtain tassle but I still don't really know how to make loose hair. Also added some things to the knight, resized the princess so he looked bigger than her, and a few other minor tweaks that probably aren't obvious.
Oh and the text isn't going to be there, I was just trying to save from making too many images so I put it there. I can't decide if I want comic style, handwritten style or classic style for the introduction part.

Also I'm trying to decide on which of these fonts I should use for Repunzal screaming (damn IFX CDs come with too many fonts to choose from
) And whether I should leave it black text on plain background or put it into a ziggyzaggy speech bubble.

Thanks!! Feedback asap would be most welcome, not just because of the deadline but because I'm going into hospital tomorrow so this is my last chance to finish this 
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