hey Rainforest, looking really good there but watch your legs. if she straightened that one leg it'd be a good foots length longer than the straight one.
Wendy, lookin a lot better now. I like how the backgrounds coming along now as well.
love your style there Rabbit. your style seems to have changed a little over time. you were good before but I really like how your style has progressed. one thing about this one, right now it seems a little right side heavy. just doesn't come off as ballanced right now.
lots of others ones goin on as well!
"Live life like a fantasy. Reality is only in your mind!" - Fabledgoat
Fable- Thanks, yes Ive changed as I learn new tricks and new programs, and I think I am being more true to myself now instead of trying to emulate artists that I admire. I agree it's lopsided right now, I'm going to have to crop and rotate and what not to get a better composition before I continue. I should have an update by tomarrow.
Rain- great idea, loved Red Sonjia, I think it's a challenging pose to do as well. Right now it looks a bit uncomfortable on the page, you might want to try cropping it a bit or moving the character around on the page.
Matt- thats looking great so far, I wouldn't change the fucia for anything, nothing else would give this piece the same feeling and impact. If you do change it make sure you keep a copy as is.
Seaman- thats looking AMAZING! what else can I say?
MjaSnowSki- thank you, i agree girls and dragons = :)
Tak- Thanks, I swear I haven't been talking to your GF haha! I realy like your initial sketch, It looks so carefree yet so exact, like youve drawn this girl a million times before, looking forward to how you develop it.
Bunny Bunny I been thinking, what the heck have you been drinking? Looks like water tastes like wine, Oh my God it's turpentine!
Rain, it looks like she might fall forward, her weight doesn't seem right, unless she is running, then her legs need more action. but i really like how the face is coming out, looks like she is gunna kill me lol. but work up the background and see how she sits before you do to many changes on her, it might help alot.
Sry about that Matt lol, i jus guessed tattoo, that's what my under painting looked like the last one i did, im still looking forward to it. Rabbits looks like a tatt and its probably that suicide girl face too. The bg got me hooked, im so excited to see what happens, your last piece gave such an emotional feel to me, and my friends. Also the left arm seams odd, almost like it is curving the other way, but nailed the hell out of her face, great expression. ((fun story matt, was at dinner with my friends, showed them your piece, one said aww, the other said "ya this is pixar-y, your screwed" lol and the other, only black guy there, said "g-damn white girl slaving my brother robot, why he got to get all wet"... crazy G))
Seamanarts, i like it but as eye flow goes, i get stuck on her hands, they are so well done in the dress that is lose. Its kinda like some old master paintings were there is highly rendered hand and faces with loosely painted outfits, but i cant make it to the face because they are so far, the masters used a triangle comp, you got one to but your triangle is to streched. don't over due the dress thu, it is awesome, but it needs something to swing around. maybe more detail in chest or buttons on dress, something dangling from her belt. or maybe the bg will bring it in when its done
And if anyone feels bad about anything I ever say, sry, i feel crits make you better, pointing out good parts dont make you a better artist, unless it is jus telling what to contiue on. I always get better the more im told it looks bad and what to fix. I wouldnt say bad things if i didnt think you could do good things. So feel free to tear me up in revenge
I felt that my image was lacking in life so I made the butterfly into a weird insectoid vampire thing... also been working on floor and goblet, am beginning to think it might actually look reasonable when it's done.
By the way I do like everyone else's stuff, I just don't have anything constructive to say beyond 'ooh pretty'. Which I guess I just covered.
Wow Aiwevanya, the marble did wonders, and commit to glass or metal for the goblet, it it is metal, put light designs into it, don't make it a focal though, if glass, really push the fact it is see threw and has reflective properties ( insect in the glass... awsome ) looking much better
I read that book so long ago. can't really remember most of it. read the first two books, never got through the rest though. started the third I think it was but for some reason couldn't get into it. can't remember what the reason was.
"Live life like a fantasy. Reality is only in your mind!" - Fabledgoat
I read that book so long ago. can't really remember most of it. read the first two books, never got through the rest though. started the third I think it was but for some reason couldn't get into it. can't remember what the reason was.
"Live life like a fantasy. Reality is only in your mind!" - Fabledgoat
Thanks for the advice, all. I'll work on that stumpy leg, and yeah, I was planning on cropping it down, but wanted to work up the background some before I decided where.
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Sry about that Matt lol, i jus guessed tattoo, that's what my under painting looked like the last one i 
