I tried overpainting the sky with impasto brushes but I couldn't get the same "look" as how I had it originally and also since I just removed the paper texture (I think it looks much better than with random dots noisily - I used a technical art term!! - scattered across the picture) I thought I'd leave the sky how it was, especially as I am fast running out of time.
Tomorrow I'm going away for a few days, not sure how long but there is a possibility that it will be beyond the deadline so I'm trying to finish off all the painterly type parts tonight (I have a feeling I'll be working through the night) so I can do the text/cropping etc on my less fancy, non-painter or photoshop, laptop.
The knight still needs his boots finished and some fingers but I couldn't work out how to put the armour on his back because I've only ever seen pictures from straight-on so I just gave him some chainmail. Does he look adequately heavy? I asked my dad and he said to extend the shoulder things to make him look bigger but he looked like some sort of space commander when I did that.
R..... girl with long hair (someone PLEASE tell me how to spell her name I'm begging you!! I need it for the comic words) is a bit of a speedpaint and I just clone-painted the window she's inside (and the prince's chainmail is also just some stock photo). I can't make her spikes of hair look realistic - believe me I know what it's like to only have a few tufts of hair - they seem too small and pixelly but if I increase the brush size or use a special hair-brush it looks like she just has short hair, not like it's been ripped out.

Hrmm, now that I've uploaded it as a whole picture instead of just focusing on one area at a time, I noticed that - considering the Fat Prince of Bell Air is supposed to be, well, large - girl-with-long-hair is much bigger than him. I'll wait to scale her later though, right now I need to finish the prince's legs and hand (ugh, drawing a hand flat on a wall was hard, how am I going to draw one wearing armour??)
Crits are desperately needed and ASAP since I only have tonight to finish the painterly things.
(and I need to know how to spell her name)
The knight looks stupid with a golden collar but no armoured back (I didn't give him a breastplate so the chainmail would show off his tummy, bad move? Oh, and I do intend to squiff the collar over a bit so the center is actually in the center of HIS chest, and not in the center of my image :P ) so does anyone have any tips on what backs-of-armour look like or how to draw them on a fat man in this position?
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