Some good entries here.....once I get your image to load ed I'm sure it will be a good one lol.  Only have a little feedback to give....hope it helps...

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Dragon – looking good, my only comment is her left arm – the elbow position looks slightly awkward, like its about to snap off – but, now scrolling through I can see you have taken a slight detour ….my only comment with this one is on the upper arm muscles and almost masculine neck line.  I can see you like well endowed women, but would suggest giving her a boob reduction as they are sagging and giving her a six pack on her abdomen area lol – planet looks great though!

Martin – wish I was an architectural guru and could provide some helpful insight.  Having looked at the paintover zimfin the only thing I can add is its like you took the picture whilst walking up a steep hill to work – the buildings start to loom out and lean over toward you.  Hope that is somewhat helpful! (Failing that just blow up the building?!) – but your update is looking much better.

Nem

Adrasteia:

Normal 0 MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Martin – wish I was an architectural guru and could provide some helpful insight.  Having looked at the paintover zimfin the only thing I can add is its like you took the picture whilst walking up a steep hill to work – the buildings start to loom out and lean over toward you.  Hope that is somewhat helpful! (Failing that just blow up the building?!) – but your update is looking much better.

 

Nem

 

Not far off Nem, those steps up to the Sacre Coeur in Paris are bloody steep!

solomon01:

martinmckeown:

Looking interesting Artysmedia, here's what's hopefully an improvement in mine:

Hey Martin, I like what you have conceptually, the mood and the design of the building are good choices.

However the perspective still looks funny to me.
I attached some paint overs. The red and blue seem to be problem areas. In general the rules are not lining up, they're pointing in different directions. Perspective is all about making the rules line up throughout the painting.

The green and orange lines show reference lines. Establishing these early in your painting will help line up all the rule lines.

The other difficulty is that this picture has a horizon line below the edge and there's a vanishing point high above the painting, so it's hard to slant the rules to be completely accurate. 

Thanx Solomon for the guide, thought I could pull this off without guides and grids and what not, obviously failed!

Sorry Martin, didn;t mean to discourage you, meant to help.  It was a nice attempt.

Want to beat my brains out of my head?

Hey Dragpn.

You really changed out your idea! This variation seems to have more Action!

My only suggestion at this point is to brighten it up a bit more, it seems dark to me.

Wow, some really nice stuff going on here.

This is what I have so far, I'm not going to keep the splattery stuff I just wanted to get a feel for where the fire and flames come in. This is a character I'm trying to develop for a comic book I'm working on. 

Nice one Rabbit,

Here's another whip for my dragons attacking jets painting.

Just looking at this at a different angle.

fabledgoat:

everythings coming along good in here. Tector, check out the thumb on your character. it looks really stumpy compared to the rest of her hand.

Thanks for the thumb-check, fabled.  Sorted.