Hey! Everybody's stuff is looking pretty amazing.

Martin - the perspective in yours looks much better. Great work. Can't wait to see it fired up in full technicolor.

Dragon - I like this new pose, especially the fire in her hands. But, I have to admit, I'm a little confused. While she's spectacularly endowed up top, the lower half of her torso is lookin' pretty masculine. I'm exhausted just thinking about how much exercise she's had to do to get in that shape.

BubbleGoth:

 I'm a little confused. While she's spectacularly endowed up top, the lower half of her torso is lookin' pretty masculine. I'm exhausted just thinking about how much exercise she's had to do to get in that shape.

our D doesn't care, as long as they are biggies, i think he's a leg man actually,  

haha, with all those updates all I really saw on this were big boobs at the moment. one thing with this image though, the hair looks really sharp and stiff.

martinmckeown:

Looking interesting Artysmedia, here's what's hopefully an improvement in mine:

Hey Martin, I like what you have conceptually, the mood and the design of the building are good choices.

However the perspective still looks funny to me.
I attached some paint overs. The red and blue seem to be problem areas. In general the rules are not lining up, they're pointing in different directions. Perspective is all about making the rules line up throughout the painting.

The green and orange lines show reference lines. Establishing these early in your painting will help line up all the rule lines.

The other difficulty is that this picture has a horizon line below the edge and there's a vanishing point high above the painting, so it's hard to slant the rules to be completely accurate. 

Sorry the *** attachment fdeature doesn't seem to allow more than one image at a time.

Anyway, The red and blue show a lot off kilter edges that aren't relating to the rest of the painting.

fabledgoat:

haha, with all those updates all I really saw on this were big boobs at the moment. one thing with this image though, the hair looks really sharp and stiff.

 

Yeah, I was really hoping the lights and shadows would soften that up, but it seems like it made it worse.