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Finally! im really sorry for all the pointless posts, i cant delete them? but yeah, heres my piece, comments and critiq needed, i have no outside views on my art!

Last post 08-31-2008, 5:04 PM by Korad. 5 replies.
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  •  08-29-2008, 7:24 PM 130217

    Finally! im really sorry for all the pointless posts, i cant delete them? but yeah, heres my piece, comments and critiq needed, i have no outside views on my art!

    Yes Captain. My first finished piece of digital art...yeah.?
    im a young ragga brother from the LDN, nike air bubbles on my feet and they cost one ten- Mozart
  •  08-29-2008, 8:53 PM 130233 in reply to 130217

    Re: Finally! im really sorry for all the pointless posts, i cant delete them? but yeah, heres my piece, comments and critiq needed, i have no outside views on my art!

    well i like it korad, can you give us a bit of background behind it? you've got a nice blurriness going on, except for her eyeball which stands out alot if you're intention was an unfocussed look, and i'm not sure what the side bit of her face is? is she a robot or something? that's why a bit of background would be good to explain it a little.  i do like it, it's a nice concept. 
  •  08-30-2008, 12:54 PM 130407 in reply to 130217

    Re: Finally! im really sorry for all the pointless posts, i cant delete them? but yeah, heres my piece, comments and critiq needed, i have no outside views on my art!

    very interesting concept.





    "Live life like a fantasy. Reality is only in your mind!" - Fabledgoat
  •  08-30-2008, 6:03 PM 130498 in reply to 130233

    Re: Finally! im really sorry for all the pointless posts, i cant delete them? but yeah, heres my piece, comments and critiq needed, i have no outside views on my art!

    thankyou

    yeah i did go for a blurry look and i will take your advice and go over that eye a bit to be more consistent like

     hmmm, background,

    well, she's a captain of some kind of space fleet, and she lost half her face in a skirmish with space pirates, and had it rebuilt, so shes like a cyber person. is that ok or do i need more detail?

     


    im a young ragga brother from the LDN, nike air bubbles on my feet and they cost one ten- Mozart
  •  08-30-2008, 6:42 PM 130510 in reply to 130498

    Re: Finally! im really sorry for all the pointless posts, i cant delete them? but yeah, heres my piece, comments and critiq needed, i have no outside views on my art!

    lol, yeah that's enough detail, i think what threw me a little is that the background looks a little 'disco' like, so i didn't know if she was a terminator type or something. nice work. 
  •  08-31-2008, 5:04 PM 130692 in reply to 130510

    Re: Finally! im really sorry for all the pointless posts, i cant delete them? but yeah, heres my piece, comments and critiq needed, i have no outside views on my art!

    Haha yeah im not happy with the background, i was intending it to look like a kindof interactive map of stars and planets around her but theyre al multicoloured and i cba to change them...

     

    thanks thoughSmile 


    im a young ragga brother from the LDN, nike air bubbles on my feet and they cost one ten- Mozart
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